A page for Shawn's book

Here is another page for my brothers book, on this one I left the journaling block blank so my mom can fill in.  This page is more girly looking than the last.This one I tried something new, the large circle, its the first time I tried a layout like this, I struggled, most of my stuff just ends up square, I need to think out of the box.

This is my updated version (to the right), I knew something was missing and when I got my flourish die's I popped a couple on here I think it looks much better.